WORK #3
By : Unknown
GROUP 3
1.
PRESENT TENSE
If
you looking for
Indonesian rupiah currency exchange rate today, you can open at www.currency.me.uk/rates/idr-indonesian-rupiah.
I think it must be:
I think it must be:
If
you are looking for Indonesian rupiah currency
exchange rate today, you can open at www.currency.me.uk/rates/idr-indonesian-rupiah.
2. Jokowi went to Brunnei for the first
bilateral relations visit on last january.
It must be:
Jokowi went to Brunnei for the first
bilateral relations visit on last January.
GROUP 7
1.
Yuli was watching
television when I cleaned the floor.
Cleaned the floor and watching television need a long
time for do it.
So the correct one is:
“ Yuli was watching television while I was cleaning the floor.”
GROUP 9
1.
Fauzy had sent me a
email before he called yesterday.
You should
use “an” for “an email”.
So correct one is:
“Fauzy had sent me an
email before he called yesterday”.
GROUP 13
1.
She
was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you come here.
The past word from come is came. So the correct one is:
“ She was reading a novel with me in the terrace, when you came here.”
“ She was reading a novel with me in the terrace, when you came here.”
Revised Work#4
By : Unknown
My Dream
My name is Dyah Budiyanti I come from a small village in Sragen.Everyone have dreams,so do I . I have some dreams that I want to achieve.First, As a child, I wanted to be a child who can raise the dignity of my parent.I would be very happy if my parents proud of me.Second , I want to graduate college in the right time with satisfactory value.I wish my knowledge will be useful not only for me but also for others. After I graduate I want to work at the tax office, but I also want to be a successful farmer who can empower people .After I succeed I want to build my parent’s home with my own money and build a library in my village because I was sad when I saw the children rarely read the books.
In the future ,I want to be a good wife and a good mother not only as a wife and mother but I also want to be a friend for my husband and my children.we foster a good family with the foundation of Islam. other than that I want to help my nephews’ education finance because their mother have always helped me in the present. I also want to go to Mecca for Hajj with my beloved family.One more ,My greatest wish is that I always be there for my parents .I don’t want my parents feel lonely in their old age like most parents in the world.
Revised
My Dream
My name is Dyah Budiyanti I come from a small village in Sragen.Everyone have dreams,so do I . I have some dreams that I want to achieve.First, As a child, I wanted to be a child who can raise the dignity of my parent.I would be very happy if my parent proud of me.Second , I want to graduate college in the right time with satisfactory score.I wish my knowledge will be useful not only for me but also for others. After I graduate I want to work at the tax office, but I also want to be a successful farmer who can empower people .After I succeed I want to build my parent’s home with my own money and build a library in my village because I was sad when I saw the children rarely read the books.
In the future ,I want to be a good wife and a good mother not only as a wife and mother but I also want to be a friend for my husband and my children.We foster a good family with the foundation of Islam. Beside that I want to help my nephews’ education finance because their mother have always helped me in the present. I also want to go to Mecca for Hajj with my beloved family.One more ,My greatest wish is that I always be there for my parents .I don’t want my parents feel lonely in their old age like most parents in the world.
Tag :
Dyah B,
Sri Utami (Teacher ),
REVISED WORK#4
By : Unknown Here is the one of the best indonesian
entrepreneur.He is the eccentric succes entrepreneur.Beside he is succes in
entrepreneur,he also religious man.He likes jazz and classic music.He is uncle
Bob Sadino.
He met his wife in
amsterdam,Netherlands. The name of his wife is Soelami Soejoed.He married and
back to indonesia on 1967.His wife was passed away on July 2014.Than,He was
passed away on January 19th 2015,he
always be forerunner of modern entrepreneur.
He started his
career by rent his car with him as a driver.But,because an accident,he dicided
to change in egg business.He used door to door system to sold his eggs. He
developed his business in to broilers.He is the first entrepreneur who used
hydroponik system in his field.
REVISED
Here is the one of the best Indonesian
entrepreneur.He is the eccentric succes entrepreneur.Besides he is succes in
entrepreneur,he also religious man.He likes jazz and classic music.He is uncle
Bob Sadino.
He met his wife in Amsterdam,Netherlands. The name of his wife is Soelami Soejoed.He married and
back to Indonesia on 1967.His wife was passed away on July 2014.Than,He was
passed away on January 19th 2015,he
always be forerunner of modern entrepreneur.
He started his
career by rent his car with him as a driver.But,because an accident,he dicided
to change in egg business.He used door to door system to sold his eggs. He
developed his business in to broilers.He is the first entrepreneur who used
hydroponik system in his field.
REVISED WORK #4
By : Unknown
Everyone has a dream. Whether they be a singer who mesmerizes everyone with his/her golden voice, or become
a scientist who discovers new and amazing things, or anything, I'm sure
they think about it. I have dreams just like everyone else. Dreams of the good life with lots of money, my established career, and also my lovely family as the source of happiness.
When I was a child, I had a lot of dreams. I didn't why, but I knew it were just desires. I wanted to be a stewardess because most of them are beautiful women. After that, I wanted to be a doctor who helps a lot of people with his white coat, so damn cool! I also wanted to be a teacher, an architect, and a famous artist. I was just dreaming of what I want, but didn't focus to run.
College is my first step to achieve my dream. Currently I am a student of State University of Semarang in Accounting major. Can you guess my dream? Alright. I want to be a professional accountant, especially public accountant. I choose it because it appropriates with my major and it has a good chance in working world, of course. But I know it will never happen without any effort. What I should do now is study hard as a student and practice to be what I want.
In addition, I want to be a businesswoman. Why do I want to be a businesswoman? Because I want to get my freedom on my job. Actually I don't like to be commanded. An independent woman who is good at dealing with business and financial matters, it may be a great choice.
Every action is a choice. Everyone has their own choice to decide what they want to be. We just have to dream and focus to achieve it. People who doesn't have a dream will not fly far away. So, keep dreaming! ^^
When I was a child, I had a lot of dreams. I didn't why, but I knew it were just desires. I wanted to be a stewardess because most of them are beautiful women. After that, I wanted to be a doctor who helps a lot of people with his white coat, so damn cool! I also wanted to be a teacher, an architect, and a famous artist. I was just dreaming of what I want, but didn't focus to run.
College is my first step to achieve my dream. Currently I am a student of State University of Semarang in Accounting major. Can you guess my dream? Alright. I want to be a professional accountant, especially public accountant. I choose it because it appropriates with my major and it has a good chance in working world, of course. But I know it will never happen without any effort. What I should do now is study hard as a student and practice to be what I want.
In addition, I want to be a businesswoman. Why do I want to be a businesswoman? Because I want to get my freedom on my job. Actually I don't like to be commanded. An independent woman who is good at dealing with business and financial matters, it may be a great choice.
Every action is a choice. Everyone has their own choice to decide what they want to be. We just have to dream and focus to achieve it. People who doesn't have a dream will not fly far away. So, keep dreaming! ^^
REVISED WORK #4
By : Unknown
Work #4
My Dreams
I believe that everyone has wonderful
hopes and dreams of their future. As a typical melancholy, I extremely desire
that everything to be perfect, especially my future life. I want to be a
successful woman in the future.
The meaning of success is quite different
for everyone may be. For me, success means doing the best we can with what we have.
When I was 9 years old I wanted to be a
Miss Indonesia who has smart brain, good behaviour and mesmerize beauty. But my
dream changed when I was in Junior High School. Sometimes I wanted to be a
lecturer, a doctor, a singer or a lawyer.
As time goes by, now I know what I want. I
already have an idea about what I should do for my career. At this time,
I'm a student of University and I take accounting major. Why do I take major in
accounting? Because accounting opens door in every kind of business.
It can give me foundation that I need to enter a business world. It also
prepares me become a good partner in accounting firm, or coorporate management to
work in a government, or even become an enterepreneur. In fact, no matter
what I decide to do, having an accounting background can open doors in a wide business.
Being a professional public accountant is
my biggest dream. Being an accountant in this firm gives me chance to meet so
many proffesionals. I can work with some variety of companies and gain wide
exposures and experiences.
I know it's not easy to reach my dream. I
need extraordinary effort to make it happens. I have to work harder and harder.
But I believe that someday my dream will come true.
Revised Work #4
By : ika arista
Chairul
Tanjung’s Biography
Chairul
Tanjung was born in Jakarta, June 16, 1962. Chairul Tanjung is a businessman
from Indonesia. His name is widely known as a successful businessman with the
company he leads, the Group. The company has a core conglomerate Holdindo as
fatherholding company, which is in charge of several sub holding, namely the
Global Investindo (business finance), The Core Investindo (media and
investment), and the Core Properindo (property). Under the group, Chairul has a
number of companies in various fields.
Chairul has started his business when he attended the Department of Dentistry, University of Indonesia. Had ups and downs, he eventually built a successful business. The Group becomes a business enterprise in charge of other companies, such as Trans TV and Mega Bank.
After finished school in high school Boedi Oetomo in 1981, he entered Department of Dentistry, University of Indonesia and graduated in 1987. In this college, he was honored as National Model Student 1984 – 1985. He started a business from selling textbooks stencils, shirts, and others on campus. He also opened a photocopy on campus. Chairul also founded a medical supply store and laboratory numbers Senen Raya, Central Jakarta. But, it was broke.
After in a college, Chairul been established PT Pariarti Shindutama with three colleagues in 1987. They produce children’s shoes for export. But Chairul choose build his ows business. His skills as an entrepreneur make his business grow. Chairul reposition his business into three core business. They are financial, property, and multimedia. The Group has a Trans TV, Trans 7, Mahagagaya Prime, Trans Fashion, Lifestyle Trans, and Trans Studio. In a property business, the Group has Bandung Supermall. The Group launched Bandung Supermall as the Central Business District in 1999. In early 2010, the Group through its subsidiary, Trans Corp bought a majority stake in Carrefour.
Chairul said that in building a business, develop a network is important. Having a partner is well needed. Building a relationship wasn’t only to companies that are reputable, but also on an unknown though. For Chairul, a good friend will help evolve business processes undertaken.
According
to Chairul, capital is important in building and growing a business. For him,
the willingness and hard work should be owned by someone who wants to succed in
business. In business, Chairul said that the younger generation businesses
should be patient and willing to venture up the stairs one at a time. Building
a business isn’t like turning the palm of the hand. It takes a patience and
never give up. Build integrity is important for Chairul.
Tag :
Ika Arista,
Sri Utami (Teacher ),
REVISED WORK#2
By : UnknownHi Miss Uut, here is the result after being revised:
1. Present tense
The
Indonesia Health Card from the President's program provides free health
insurance for the poor Indonesian.
2. Present continous tense
If you are
looking for Indonesian rupiah currency exchange rate today, you can open at www.currency.me.uk/rates/idr-indonesian-rupiah.
3. Past tense
Jokowi
went to Brunnei for the first bilateral relations visit on last January.
4. Past perfect tense
Mr.
Joko Widodo had launched three programs named Health Health Card,
Indonesia Smart Card, and Family Welfare Fund before he
decided to increace the price of fuel.
5. Past continous tense
I
was reading Java
Pos newspaper when my father came from his office.