Jumat, 27 Maret 2015
Hello Miss Uut, we are the Group 5.
This is the second work or the team work from our group. It's our sentences from 5 tenses :
1. Simple Present Tense
This is the second work or the team work from our group. It's our sentences from 5 tenses :
1. Simple Present Tense
- Every month, Rina and her mother go
shopping at sampangan traditional market to buy some clothes.
- The sun rises in the east.
2. Simple Past Tense
- Two days ago, my teacher said to me that math is not
difficult.
- Yesterday, Rini had lunch in restaurant
with her classmates in order of her birthday.
3. Past perfect tense
- The thief had run away after he got alot of
money from the bank.
- Before my uncle went abroad, he had studied
English from Mr. Jones.
4. Past Continuous Tense
- While a producer was making product, a consumers were
competing to get the product.
- Ranti was studying hard about accounting
while I was listening to the radio.
5. Present Continuous Tense
- Riza is studying math with her friends in
her house at the moment.
- Indonesian people are preparing for AEC
(Asean Economic Comunity) tomorrow.
Thank you ^_^
Thank you ^_^
Hi Group 5. Thanks.
BalasHapus"a consumers were competing to get the product", please think again about this sentence. You need to consider how many consumer? the use of "a" with "consumers", why?
we are sorry mom, it seems our wrong because we did not type it carefully ^_^
HapusHello, Group 5. I want to comment about your work. Let's see.
BalasHapus1. Every month, Rina and her mother go shopping at sampangan traditional market to buy
some clothes.
I think the sentence above is correct. But if you want to write the name of place, you must use
the capital letter of the beginning word. “Every month, Rina and her mother go shopping
at Sampangan traditional market to buy some clothes.”
2. Yesterday, Rini had lunch in restaurant with her classmates in order of her birthday.
I think you must add article when you want to write “restaurant” because in that sentence
I think you want to show one of place. “Yesterday, Rini had lunch in a restaurant with
her classmates in order of her birthday.”
3. The thief had run away after he got a lot of money from the bank.
I think that sentence is not correct. Because I think you must use "Past Tense" when you
write “The thief had run away” and use "Past Perfect" when you write “he got a lot of money
from the bank”. I think “the thief had run away” is just happen after “the thief was got a lot
of money from the bank”. So I think the correct sentence is “The thief ran away after he had
gotten a lot of money from the bank”.
4. While a producer was making product, a consumers were competing to get the product.
I think use article “a” in that sentence is not correct. Because “consumers” in here is not just
one or it is plural. So you should write “While a producer was making product, the
consumers were competing to get the product.”
Oke. That is my comment, I hope you can recomment on my work.
Thank You. :D