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- Work#2 Group 3
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Jumat, 27 Maret 2015
Hi Miss...
It's our sentences from 5 tenses.. :D
1. Present Tense
Indonesia Health Card from the President's program provides free health insurance for the poor Indonesian.
Work#3
BalasHapusWell, I would like to give some reviews and feedbacks for 3rd group. In general i like all of these sentences but i also find some eror sentences.
Present Tense : Using articles like A/An or The is different to applied in some sentences. “The” is used for spesific noun but “A/An” is used for non-spesific noun. In this case you can add “The”, So it must be written... “The Indonesia Health Card...”
Past Perfect Tense : i think you should add any adverb in this case for example “since a week ago”.
It's enough. Thanks ^_^
Hi Group 3. Thanks.
BalasHapusIn sentence "Mr. Joko Widodo had launched three programs named Indonesia Health Card, Indonesia Smart Card, and Family Welfare Fund", please add with another event which also happened in the past. Then you use the past tense sentence in the later event (kejadian setelahnya) (past perfect + past tense). For instance:
"Mr. Joko Widodo had launched three programs named Indonesia Health Card, Indonesia Smart Card, and Family Welfare Fund before the price of rice increased". Did you get it?
Before it, Thanks for Hendra and Miss uut to give us good feedback.. ^_^
BalasHapusActually now i understand..
for past perfect tense ,we should add an event with another event which also happened in the past..
and in the first even it's using past perfect and later event using past tense
isn't it?
and about using articles "the", i think it's useful knowledge and we will try to make next sentence better then this.. ^_^
For all..
don't you catch some gramatical error again from above sentences?