Minggu, 26 April 2015
Work #4
My Dreams
I believe that everyone has wonderful
hopes and dreams of their future. As a typical melancholy, I extremely desire
that everything to be perfect, especially my future life. I want to be a
successful woman in the future.
The meaning of success is quite different
for everyone. For me, success means doing the best we can with what we have.
When I was 9 years old I wanted to be a
Miss Indonesia who has smart brain, good behaviour and mesmerize beauty. But my
dream was changed when I was in Junior High School. Sometimes I wanted to be a
lecturer, a doctor, a singer or a lawyer.
As time goes by, now I know what I want. I
already have an idea about what I should do for my career. At this time,
I'm a student of University and I take accounting major. Why major in
accounting? Because accounting opens door in every kind of business to coast.
It can give me foundation that I need to enter a business world. It also
prepare me become a partner in accounting firm, or coorporate management to
work in government, or even become an enterepreneur. In fact, no matter
what I decide to do, having an accounting background can open doors wide.
Being a professional public accounting is
my biggest dream. Being an accountant in this firm give me chance to meet so
many proffesionals. I can work with some variety of companies and gain wide
exposures and experiences.
I know it's not easy to reach my dream. It
need extraordinary effort to make it happens. I have to work harder and harder.
But I believe that someday my dream will come true.
Hi nanaaa:D I think your article is good enough but there are some mistakes. Let me revise it.
BalasHapus1.1. Why major in accounting?
I think it's better to write "Why do I take accounting major?"
2. It also prepare me become a partner in accounting firm, or coorporate management to work in government, or even become an enterepreneur.
It must be "It also prepares me ..."
3. Being a professional public accounting is my biggest dream.
You should say it "being a professional accountant ..." because it's a profession.
4. It need extraordinary effort to make it happens.
It must be "it needs ..."
5. But my dream was changed when I was in Junior High School.
It must be "but my dream changed when.. "
Thank you so much Putri for revising some grammar errors in mine. I can't believe you were so thorough :D keep reading my article Putri^^
BalasHapus