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My Dreams
Let me introduce my self, my name is Hendra Wahyu Hidayat. I would like to tell about my dreams. I have a lot of dreams. Sometimes, I want to be a teacher because my aunt is a teacher. After that, I think again I want to be an army, because they are cool when they are bringing guns on their shoulders, and walking along the road.
However, I have grown up. As the time goes by, I think what I want to be. Now, I’m studying at State University of Semarang Acccounting Department, offcourse I want to be an accountant its spesification is an internal accountant in a large company. We know that like a public coorporation. I won’t say easily to be a businessman, because I need to be an employer about 5 years because I want get experience. What will I do after this? I learn some opportunities around us & I begin to learn a business. What kind of business? I begin to build a trading company. Because of i like IT (information technology) , like computers, printers, programming, games ,etc. I want to make my parents proud of me.
However, I’m a planner, I never think it without any effort. I conclude that learning, people networking, improving skills, they are needed and I also never think just a business or a carrier because I plan to get married at 28th. I will marry a smart beautiful woman. I will have my own family. We’ll live in a big house with a garden inside it. We live happily ever after. That’s All ^_^
Bill Gates “The Richest Man in the World”
Bill Gates is a succesful businessman , I know about him, in full William Henry Gates III was born October 28, 1955, Seattle, Washington, U.S., American computer programmer and entrepreneur who cofounded Microsoft Corporation, the world’s largest personal-computer software company. As founder of Microsoft, Bill Gates is one of the most influential and richest people on the world. His father ,William Henry Gates was a corporate lawyer who has many relations in the city. But his mother Mary Maxwell an employee of Bank. Bill Gates married Melinda French in 1992. They had 3 children Jennifer,
Rory and Phoebe. With his wife Bill Gates formed the Bill & Melinda
Gates Foundation.
He quickly learned BASIC, a computer programming language, and with the hackers who taught himself in Lakeside, he spent much times writing a program, gaming, and learned a lot about computers. Bill Gates began to study at Harvard University in Cambridge began in 1975. There he met with Paul Allen during in University. Together with Paul Allen, Bill Gates continued to develop his talents in the field of computer programming. However, Bill Gates dropped out of Harvard University to get focus in Microsoft. In 1990 Microsoft released its first version of Windows. It soon became a best seller and was able to capture the majority of the operating system market share. This version of windows has been the backbone of all future releases from Windows 2000 to Windows 10 now. Besides of Operating System another product is MSN live search which is the one of the famous search engine besides of Google. That’s All ^_^
Please give your suggestion to my posting. I will be glad to respond all of your feedbacks. Thanks!
I hope you can make your dreams come true :).
BalasHapusI am sorry, I will give you feedback about your dreams.
“...Because of i like IT (information technology) , like computers, printers, programming, games , etc. ...” (second paragraph).
I think, the word “i” at the sentence is using capital characters “I”.
Then,
I will give you feedback about the description of Bill Gates, especially about philanthropic activities.
“...Bill Gates married Melinda French in 1992. They had 3 children Jennifer (1996), Rory (1999), and Phoebe (2002). ...”
At the word "had " in that sentence, should use "have" . Because it explains that Bill Gates and Melinda French have 3 children until now .
“...Bill Gates married Melinda French in 1992. They had 3 children Jennifer (1996), Rory (1999), and Phoebe (2002). ...”
I think, it will be better “They had 3 children, there are Jennifer (1996), Rory (1999), and Phoebe (2002).
Thank you.
Amiin ,
Hapusoo thanks for your suggestion, it seems my wrong :D
but about "They had 3 children.." in past context I use "had" because I wrote their year of birth , just it, I'll post the revised version soon :D thanks