Kamis, 23 April 2015
Hi guys, I will tell you about Hermawan Kartajaya.
Hermawan Kartajaya was
born on 18th of November 1947. He is an Indonesian marketing expert. Since 2002,
he served as President of the World Marketing Association and by The Chartered
Institute of Marketing which is based in England he was crowned as 50 Gurus Who Have Shaped The Future of Marketing.
He is also served as President of Mark Plus & Co now, the consultant
management company based on Asia who is in established since 1990.
Kartajaya ever
underwent in Electrical Engineering Institute of Sepuluh November, but it
should be get out because of the economic problems. In 2010, ITS Surabaya conferring
Doctor Honoris Causa, the first in history, to Hermawan Kartajaya to the achievement
of marketing science world. Hermawan Kartajaya active write books about the
world of marketing. Kartajaya was a first Indonesia who entered the domain of
international marketing with a model he makes own. He also founder and President
of Mark Plus always said if want to build a strong brand companies should not
just rely on advertising. The company should do something in mind of consumers,
it is not just to sell but have longer term implications.
Hello Ukhti, let me give feedback for your assignment.
BalasHapus1. Since 2002, (he) (has) served as President of the World Marketing Association. (I think this sentence is very complicated. It will be better if you add full stop after the word Association).
2. The Chartered Institute of Marketing which is based in England (he was crowned) (has crowned him) as 50 Gurus (how about this word "figure") Who (who "Don't use capital letter") Have (you must use has because the subject is one person) Shaped The Future of Marketing.
3. Kartajaya ever underwent (I don't know what have you mean about underwent) in Electrical Engineering Institute of Sepuluh November.
4. In 2010, ITS Surabaya (is) conferring Doctor Honoris .
5. the first in history, to Hermawan Kartajaya to the achievement of marketing science world (I think it is very complicated, how about this sentence "The first in history, Hermawan Kertajaya get an achievement of marketing science world).
6. Kartajaya was a first Indonesia(n) (marketing) who entered the domain of international marketing with a model he makes own (a model from himself).
7. He also founder and President of Mark Plus (you can add a full stop). He always said if want to build a strong brand companies should not just rely on advertising. You can also use this alternative "He also a founder and President of Mark Plus that said..."
Thank you Ukhti
Thank you Asri for your suggestions. Okey, I will try to explain.
BalasHapus1. The "50 Gurus Who Have Shaped The Future of Marketing" is the title, so I use capital letter.
2. And "underwent" is meaning "mejalani/mengalami/mengenyam."
Thank you very much Asri. :)
Hello Ukhti, I will give some feedback for you.
BalasHapus- Hermawan Kartajaya was born “on 18th of November 1947.”
I think you should write that sentence like this:
Hermawan Kartajaya was born “on November 18th, 1947” or “in 18th November 1947.”
- Since 2002, he served as President of the World Marketing Association and by The Chartered Institute of Marketing which is based in England he was crowned as 50 Gurus Who Have Shaped The Future of Marketing.
Your sentence I think good enough but it will be better if you write your sentence like this :
Since 2002, he served as President of the World Marketing Association and he was crowned as "50 Gurus Who Have Shaped The Future of Marketing" by The Chartered Institute of Marketing which is based in England.
- Kartajaya ever underwent in Electrical Engineering Institute of Sepuluh November, but it should be get out because of the economic problems.
I think you should change Kartajaya had studied Electrical Engineering on the Sepuluh November Institute, but he should stop his education because of the economic problems.
- In 2010, ITS Surabaya conferring Doctor Honoris Causa, the first in history, to Hermawan Kartajaya to the achievement of marketing science world.
I am sorry I don’t understand what do you mean.
- He also founder and President of Mark Plus always said if want to build a strong brand companies should not just rely on advertising.
I think your sentence is not true. I think it will be better if you write your sentence like this :
Kartajaya is the founder and President Mark Plus who always say " if you ( subject ) want to build a strong brand company ( do not use the " object + s " if you use the article " a " ) You shouldn't just use the advertisement."
Okee Ukhti. That is my feedback for you. And thank you for your feedback in my work.
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