Jumat, 24 April 2015
Good morning Miss Uut and you too Guys.
In here I want to tell you about Irwan Hidayat and also about my dreams.
IRWAN
HIDAYAT
President Director of PT. Sidomuncul
Irwan Hidayat is a President
Director of PT Sidomuncul. Irwan Hidayat is the grandson of the Sidomuncul
fonder was named Rahkmat Sulistio (Go Djing Nio). The company was inherited to
him and his brothers in 1972.
Irwan Hidayat was born in
April 23th, 1947. He is the first child of the five siblings. Irwan Hidayat is
the third generation who is still holding the leadership of the company. Irwan
hidayat always make the wisdom as priority in running his company. For example,
he always make the employees feel satisfaction in their work and always trying
to be honest in his business.
To make Sidomuncul became the
great company, it’s not easy. It took many years to make Sidomuncul exist as a
Company Herbal that equivalent with other Pharmaceutical Industry. Many of the
challenges and obstacles that he passed before.
Hard work and persistence of
him, was able to make successful of Sidomuncul until today. After successfully
delivering Sidomuncul as one of the largest Herbal Medicine Company in
Indonesia, did’t make Irwan Hidayat was arrogant. He actually has a social concern
for the fate of the poor.
Irwan Hidayat is a figure of a
leader and owner of a company that is very simple. Unlike most other company
directors, Irwan Hidayat is willing to go down to the traditional market for
doing market reserch.
Only in 10 years, this company
earned more than 120 awards. Such as the ICSA, Ibba, Marketing Award, Disc, and
other awards.
I very amazed with him. He is
a simple man and a philanthropist man. With his position as the President
Directur of SidoMuncul, he willings to go down to traditional market just to
meet the seller of Sidomuncul products. In addition, he always divides
happiness with others, especially with the poor people.
My
Dreams
My name is Uswatun
Khasanah. Like most people, I also have a dream. When I was a child, my dream
was to be a doctor. Because I thought when I could became a doctor, I could
help a lot of people who needs my help. But then, I thought the process to be a
docter was not easy and many things which made me bury the dream. As the time goes
by, my dream was changed. I had other dream. I wanted to be a teacher, because
at that time I thought being teacher is very remarkable because I could
socialize and share my knowlege to my students. But , when I thought again , I
did not have the ability that support me to become a teacher.
When I was growing up, finally
I knew what I want to be. When I decided to continue my study in State
University of Semarang, I have decided that my dream is to be an accountant.
That is the dream that I want to relize. Become a professional accountant who
work for a goverment or a bigger company.
Not only that, I want to make
my parents proud of the achievements that I have. Because all that I have today
is happen because of support from my parents.
So, to relize my dream I must
prepare myself as best as possible now. Such as study hard to get high score in
the class. Because the dream will not come by itself without any effort to
relize the dream.
Good Morning Uus :)
BalasHapusI will give you feedback in your work.
“I __ very amazed with him.”
After subject, you must add to be (am) because after subject in the sentence is adjective.
“...my dream #was to be# a doctor.” (first paragraph)
I think, you must replaced by “wanted to be” or “became” because that’s like unsual and it’s past form context.
I think, the word “relize” it is error written. Maybe, it is “release”. If the sentence
used word “release”. I think the sentence is correct. Example : That is the dream that I want to release.
Thank you.
Thanks for your feedback Devi. I will use that to revise my work.
HapusThank you :)
Hi Uswatun,
BalasHapusI think your writing about your dreams there are some wrong word that is docter, knowlege, and relize.It should be written docter-->doctor, knowlege-->knowledge, relize-->realize.
Thank you..
Oh, I am sorry Ukhti. I really forget about It...
HapusThank you :D
I would like to give a feedback for your work. I find a sentence "So, to relize my dream I must prepare myself as best as possible now".
BalasHapus"relize" it's a wrong word, so you should be written "realize" :)
Thank you Ema. I am sorry, I really forget about It... :D
HapusKomentar ini telah dihapus oleh pengarang.
BalasHapusHy Uswatun :)
BalasHapusLet me give you some feedback.
Irwan hidayat always 'make' the wisdom as priority in running his company. For example, he always 'make' the employees feel satisfaction in their work and always trying to be honest in his business.
Because that setence is simple present tense so, when we used He (Irwan) as a subject we must add 's' in verb. So, u can replace in
Irwan hidayat always 'makes' the wisdom as priority in running his company. For example, he always 'makes' the employees feel satisfaction in their work and always trying to be honest in his business.
Irwan Hidayat is a figure of a leader and owner of a company that is very simple.
I think that sentence is complicated, maybe u can replace that sentence to ' Irwan is a very simple figure of a leader and owner of a company.'
That's my feedback, I hope you can feedback me too. Thanks :*
Thanks for your feedback Ines. I really appreciate that..
Hapus:D
You r welcome 😊
HapusHi uswatuuuuun :D I think your work is good enough but there are some mistakes on you work. Let me revise it.
BalasHapus1. In here I want to tell you about Irwan Hidayat and also about my dreams.
I think it must be "here" so the correct one is "Here I want to tell you about my Irwan Hidayat and also about my dreams."
2. Irwan hidayat always make the wisdom as priority in running his company. For example, he always make the employees feel satisfaction in their work and always trying to be honest in his business.
I think you should write it "makes" not make, because the subject is "he". And "trying" on your sentence must be "tries" also. The formula of sentences for that subject is "she/he+verb(s)+object".
So the correct one is "Irwan hidayat always makes the wisdom as priority in running his company. For example, he always makes the employees feel satisfaction in their work and always tries to be honest in his business."
3. Like most people, I also have a dream.
The correct one is "like the most of people"
4. Because I thought when I could became a doctor, I could help a lot of people who needs my help.
The correct one is "Because when I could become a doctor, I could help a lot of people who needs my help."
5. Become a professional accountant who work for a goverment or a bigger company.
It must be "Become a professional accountant who works for a goverment or a big company."
Okay that's my feedbacks. I hope you'll give yours on my works too. Thanks :)
Okee. thank you for your feedback Vera...
Hapus:D