Minggu, 26 April 2015
Good Evening
Miss Uut,
I want to
give you my revised work#2.
Before it, I
want to tell you.In this revised work#2, I used my friends feedbacks and my
suggestion for finished it. Thank you very much to my friends. There are
Muhammad Rif”an Jailaini, Ema Adriyanti, Ika Arista,Endang Pujianti, and Putri Vera
because them reminded me about my mistakes in my posting. :D
A. Description of Mark Zuckerberg
Before it, do you know who is Mark
Zuckerberg? Mark Zuckerberg is an
intellegent person who founded Facebook. His full name is Mark Elliot
Zuckerberg. Mark was born on May 14th, 1984 in New York. And now, he is 30
years old. He has three sisters. Since childhood, Zuckerberg likes tinkering with
computers. He tried a variety of computer programs and learned to make it.
When he was studying at Harvard
University, he tried to create a website. His first project was CourseMatch.
From his project, he had refusal from
his friends. But, he didn’t disappointed, and continued to create new website
with Facebook name. That website, he launched in February 2004. He worked very
bussy during he has managing the facebook. So, Zuckerberg must decided out of
Harvard University.
Facebook makes Zackerberg to be a
business who has abundant wealth. He was working on Facebook, he got money
reached US $ 1.5 billion and He also got degree as The Youngest `Self-made
'Billionaire on the Planet and “The Youngest Billionaire” from Forbes magazine.
Although Zackerberg has abundant
wealth, he looks a simple person.
On May 19th, 2012, he was married
with Priscilla Chan. And then, they lives in a small modest's apartment. And
now, he works as a Chairman & CEO of Facebook.
I love his inspiration phrase
"If you are share the ability for other people, you will make the world
more transparent.”
A.
Description of Mark Zuckerberg (Revised)
Before it, do you know who is Mark
Zuckerberg? Mark Zuckerberg is an
intellegent person who found Facebook. His full name is Mark Elliot
Zuckerberg. Mark was born on May 14th, 1984 in New York. And now, he is 30
years old. He has three sisters. Since childhood, Zuckerberg likes tinkering with
computers. He tried a variety of computer programs and learned to make it.
When he was studying at Harvard
University, he tried to create a website. His first project was CourseMatch.
From his project, he had refusal from
his friends. But, he didn’t disappointed, and continued to create new website
with Facebook name. That website, he launched on February 2004. He worked very busy during he has managing the facebook. So, Zuckerberg
must decided out of Harvard University.
Facebook makes Zackerberg to be a
business who has abundant wealth. He was working on Facebook, he got money
reached US $ 1.5 billion and he also got degree as The Youngest `Self-made
'Billionaire on the Planet and “The Youngest Billionaire” from Forbes magazine.
Although Zackerberg has abundant
wealth, he looks a simple person.
On May 19th, 2012, he was married
with Priscilla Chan. And then, they
live in a small modest's apartment. And now, he works as a Chairman
& CEO of Facebook.
I love his inspiration phrase
"If you are share the ability for other people, you will make the world
more transparent.”
B. My Dreams
MY DREAMS
All of people have dreams. Without
dreams, we can’t life with happiness. Before it, I want to introduce myself. My
name is Andina Lidiarti. I have a lot of dreams. When I was a child, my dream
was to be a teacher and as the time goes by I have other dreams. Sometimes, I
want to be a singer, an artist, a doctor, a dancer and other interesting
dreams. Too much dreams which I want, and it make me confused to choose it. But, when I graduated from
Vocational High School, and I continue my study in State University of
Semarang, I finally know what I want to be. In State University of Semarang, I
take Accounting major. I don’t know with my dreams why I interested to be a
public accountant. Actually, I don’t know
what is a public accountant. Maybe, that is revelation from God for me. So, I
must hard work to throw my dreams. Before that, I must graduate with cumlaude
degree. After I graduate, I want to work in Public Accountant Office and I want
to build Accountant Office by myself.
That is just the beginning of my
dreams. After, I work for 3 or 4 years, I will have a lot of money. In my first
dreams, I will to take my family to Makkah for “Umroh” or “Hajji”. If I reach
success, I will build a big house where there are large garden, a big swimming
pool, a karaoke room, a gym room and a mosque. Besides, I will a build a big
mosque for my village because that is one of my dream when I was a child. And I
will give a part of my money to build my village to be a better village and I
will build a free school. And also with a part of my money, I will give my
money for duafa. Because, in purpose of my life, I can advantage for many
people. If I have a lot money but I can’t
make devided and make other people feel happy too. So, what the meaning of my life?
I think that
is all I can say about my dreams. I wish my dreams come true in my life.
B. My Dreams (Revised)
MY DREAMS
All of people have dreams. Without
dreams, we can’t life with happiness. Before it, I want to introduce myself. My
name is Andina Lidiarti. I have a lot of dreams. When I was a child, my dream
was to be a teacher and as the time goes by I have other dreams. Sometimes, I
want to be a singer, an artist, a doctor, a dancer and other interesting
dreams. Too much dreams which I want, and its make me confused to choose it. But, when I graduated from
Vocational High School, and I continue my study in State University of
Semarang, I finally know what I want to be. In State University of Semarang, I
take Accounting major. I don’t know with my dreams why I interested to be a
public accountant. Actually, I don’t know
what is a public accountant. Maybe, that is revelation from God for me. So, I
must hard work to throw my dreams. Before that, I must graduate with cumlaude
degree. After I graduate, I want to work in Public Accountant Office and I want
to build Accountant Office by myself.
That is just the beginning of my
dreams. After I work for 3 or
4 years, I will have a lot of money. In my first dreams, I will to take my
family to Makkah for “Umroh” or “Hajji”. If I reach success, I will build a big
house where there are large garden, a big swimming pool, a karaoke room, a gym
room and a mosque. Besides, I will build a big mosque for my village
because that is one of my dream when I was a child. And I will give a part of
my money to build my village to be a better village and I will build a free
school. And also with a part of my money, I will give my money for duafa.
Because, in purpose of my life, I can advantage for many people. If I have a
lot money but I can’t make devided and
make other people feel happy too. So,
what the meaning of my life?
I think that
is all I can say about my dreams. I wish my dreams come true in my life.
^_^ Thank you ...
an, I couldn't publish my post. what should I do?
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