Writing Project A

Hy friends... Let me to correct some of your assigments :)

1. For Group 1

- Lina was studying English when her parents were cleaning the house.
I think u should use 'while' not 'when', because after when is past tense. So, the right sentence is ' Lina was studying English while her parents were cleaning the house.

2. For Group 3

-  If you looking for Indonesian rupiah currency exchange rate today, you can open at www.currency.me.uk/rates/idr-indonesian-rupiah.
The formula of Simple Present Continues is S + tobe (is,am,are) + V ing. U didn't use tobe in your sentence.So, the right sentence is 'If you are looking for Indonesian rupiah currency exchange rate today, you can open at www.currency.me.uk/rates/idr-indonesian-rupiah.'

- Jokowi went to Brunnei for the first bilateral relations visit on last january.
  U had written the right sentence, but if u want to write the name of the month u should use capital letter on the first of the word. 'Jokowi went to Brunnei for the first bilateral relations visit on last January.'

3. For Group 4

- I always washes my face and brushes my teeth before going to bed.
U did't need to use V+es because V+es is just for subject 'She,He,It'. So, the right sentence is 'I always wash my face and brush my teeth before going to bed.'

- My friend are helping me to solve my problem. 
If your friend that helping you to solve your problem just one you should use tobe 'is', but if your friend more than one u should write the subject + s. So, the right sentence is 'My friends are helping me to solve my problem.' or 'My friend is helping me to solve my problem.' 

4. For Group 5

- Every month, Rina and her mother go shopping at sampangan traditional market to buy some clothes. 
U have written the right sentence, but if u want to write the name of the place, u should use capital letter on the first of the word. 'Every month, Rina and her mother go shopping at Sampangan traditional market to buy some clothes.'

5. For Group 6

-I was sleeping when my mother was cooking yesterday.
I think u should use 'while' not 'when', because after when is past tense. So, the right sentence is ' I was sleeping while my mother was cooking yesterday.'

6. For Group 9

-I known you after I had met with your family.
I'm sorry I don't know the meaning of the sentence. 

7. For Group 10

- This product was expired, you have to saw the labels before you bought it.
As I know after 'to' is V1. So, the right answer is 'This product was expired, you have to see the labels before you bought it.'

-I was recording supplies inventory while  my partner moved this car to the parking area.
-He was washing his car while his assistant cleaned his garden.
-Vitta was making some cakes while her mother went to the market.
The formulas are
while + past continuous tense
when + past tense
So, the right sentences are :
-I was recording supplies inventory while  my partner were moving this car to the parking area.
-He was washing his car while his assistant was cleaning his garden.
 -Vitta was making some cakes while her mother was going to the market.

8. For Group 13

- She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you come here.
 The formula is when + past tense. So, the right sentence is 'She was reading a Novel with me in the terrace, when you came here. '

That's all my feedback, I've done as good as I can. Thanks for you attention :) :*