Good Evening, Miss Uut..
I want to feedback about some grammatical errors with my suggestions. Before it, I'm Sorry if my suggestions have mistakes.
1. GROUP 4
"I always
woke up at 4 o'clock, but now is not."
* I think if that sentence is past tense, better it use the words which to show past information. And after first sentence a better to use subject. " I always woke up at 4 o'clock in the past, but I don't now. "
2. GROUP 4
"I always washes my face and brushes my teeth before going to bed."
*I think a right sentence is " I always wash my face and brush my teeth before going to bed"
Because Subject (I,we,they,you) don't use ' s/es' but if Subject (she,it,he) use 's/es'.
3. GROUP 5
"Every month, Rina and her mother go shopping at sampangan traditional market to buy some clothes."
* I think the correct "Every month, Rina and her mother go to Sampangan traditional market to buy clothes."
Because that sentence less good, using the word "shopping" a better it disappear and using the word "some clothes" too over, because "clothes" is a part totality about skirt, t-shirt, and shirt etc.
Thank you...
^_^
Jumat, 03 April 2015
I am sorry Andina, allow me to correct your feedback :)
BalasHapus"I always woke up at 4 o'clock in the past, but I don't now".
The use of "don't" should not be followed adverb but should have followed Verb 1. So, I think the correct sentence "but now is it now" not "but I don't now".
Thank you :)
Hello, Andina. I want to comment about your work. Let's see.
BalasHapus1. I always woke up at 4 o'clock, but now is not.
I think meaning of the Author is the incident is always happen before, but now is not
happen again. I think that sentence will be better if it change with “I always woke up at 4
o’clock, but I don’t do it again.”
2. Every month, Rina and her mother go shopping at sampangan traditional market to buy
some clothes."
Andina : I think the correct "Every month, Rina and her mother go to Sampangan
traditional market to buy clothes."
Uswatun : I don’t agree with you Andina. I think the sentence above is correct. But, the
word “sampangan” in that sentence should be change. Because “sampangan” is the name
of place so you must use capital letter of the beginning word. “Every month, Rina and her
mother go shopping at Sampangan traditional market to buy some clothes."
Oke. That is my comment and thank you for your comment in my work. I very apreciate that.
:D
Devi, before it, Thanks for your feedback in my posting. But I don't understand what do you mean. Please, help me to understand what do you mean.
BalasHapus:D
Uswatun, thanks for your feedback.
BalasHapusYour commentin number 1, you less add "now" word. Because that incident is not happen now. My suggestion in the second your feedback in my written "Sampangan" word is correct, isn't ? Why you comment again. hehehe. Just Kidding :D
Okey, I will use your feedback to add in my revised.
Hi Andinaaa :D I wanna give some feedbacks to your works.
BalasHapus~> I always washes my face and brushes my teeth before going to bed."
I think it must be "wash" and "brush" because the subject is I. It is a single subject. So the correct one is "I always wash my face and brush my teeth before going to bed."
That's my feedbacks and I hope you'll give your feedbacks on my work too. Thanks :)